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The Dawn 2 _ a prophecy by *17dreams:icon17dreams:





She’s sun beams
Wrapped in silken skin
Bound in fine linen
Infectious grinnin’
Nefertiti face atop a
Bubble gum chest
Got sign of twin moons
In the back of the dress
Act like you don’t know
But hell, I checked
Jiggle when she steps
Yet, incredibly fit
Solomon sang songs
But never like this

Proximity close enough
To feel the swell of full hips
Tighten the polarity
To cotton candy lips
And the sharp mind
More than heightens the gift
Intelligent eyes
Glimmer in dark times
Eternally shine
Like
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light
Love rekindled like
Phoenix from the ashes of
Yo yesterday life
Make you wonder if you found your
For-life-wife
Make you want to
Re-examine your whole damned life
Sunlight
Beaming from butterscotch skin
Lay aside the linen,
For throaty moans and grinnin’
A Nefertiti
With soul divine
One day she'll be mine
©2007-2009 *17dreams
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Submitted: April 16, 2007
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...but is it art?

Hmmm...
Who cares!? I like it! Ha!

Can't wait to meet her!

Update:

OK! I met her! Guess it really was a prophecy. Should change the name of this joint to A' i s h a !

Now I gotta write that poem where I meet a couple million tax free dollars with my name on them!
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*Yamenja:iconYamenja: Apr 17, 2007, 2:20:06 AM
Of course it's art - of the finest order too.....

It's beautiful!
The illustration goes with it so perfectly too....both are pretty phenomenal.

Damn...!

:worship:

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~Gunzino:iconGunzino: Apr 17, 2007, 5:41:08 AM
Damn!! Mister 17dreams, you just awoke my 18th dream to write!! Yeah man this is too nice, give it a 5 star!!
~Gunzino:iconGunzino: Apr 17, 2007, 5:43:00 AM
One question what's a nefertiti? Explain to me, so i can use it in a sentence and get dat nefertiti face of a lady, lol!!
~moejo:iconmoejo: Apr 17, 2007, 7:16:01 AM
a toast to both you and them :ahoy:

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HORSESHIT, BUY TACOS
~Jdubb:iconJdubb: Apr 17, 2007, 7:28:28 AM
you just proved that you don't need a brush to paint a very cool picture.great job man!
*17dreams:icon17dreams: Apr 17, 2007, 7:41:23 AM
Nefertiti face; a face like the Egyptian Queen Nefertiti, wife of King Akhenaten.
As in [link]

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If it's worth having, it's worth fighting for!
*17dreams:icon17dreams: Apr 17, 2007, 7:46:45 AM
Oh you! :O_o:
You've just given proof to the myth; chocolate does :blush:
Thank you so much for the good vibes!

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If it's worth having, it's worth fighting for!
*17dreams:icon17dreams: Apr 17, 2007, 7:56:05 AM
You didn't need me for that, young Brother! You got mad gifts! But I thank you for the +fav:
My poetry (or whatever) is all lyrical. Don't make it to the studio now days, but I still write all the time.

Sound familiar, yeah? You're a musician too? I checked out your stuff last night. Ha-ha!
You know too, aye!? She's great! That's my Peoples!!

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If it's worth having, it's worth fighting for!
*odavis:iconodavis: Apr 17, 2007, 7:56:33 AM
Wow, nicely done!!! :-)

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“There is a tremendous sensual-sexual expression in art and I feel that energy is often...’the driving force?’ " —Kate Bush, 1978
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